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I needed you, like you needed me
I felt for you, like you felt for me
I thought of you, as you thought of me
I was to you, what you were to me

Yet now you hurt, yet now you cry
Yet now alone, you feel inside
Another one, has wounded me
Another one! How could I be

So stupid! Foolish! What was I thinking!?
But...

When I hurt for you, and
Screamed out loud

When I begged for you
You heard no sound

When I cried for you
It didn't show... and

When I died for you
You didn't know
Both sides always hurt. Even if it doesn't look that way...
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:iconoakleafninja23:
This is beautiful. It shows so much perspective for both sides, and it's so true. Though right now I feel like the last line: "When I died for you, you didn't know."
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Mabogunje Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's how I felt when I wrote it myself. It's always hard to see other's pain through your own, and vice-versa.

But if you can get each other to see that, then at the very least even if you still part ways, you don't walk away feeling completely wronged.
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:iconoakleafninja23:
True...

Meh. Wish it was that simple.
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Mabogunje Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. It never is, is it...
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CheckerBoardJester Oct 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I absolutely love this.
May I copy this down on a piece of paper and put it on my wall?
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Mabogunje Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad! :D
I don't see why not. As long as you're not making money off it or passing it off as your own work, there's nothing wrong with making your own hardcopy :)
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CheckerBoardJester Oct 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :D I really appreciate it.
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Mabogunje Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
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